Tuesday, September 08, 2009

When Everything's Made To Be Broken



"You?"

"Yeah?"

She played with my watch. Her finger danced on the glass cover, following the needle as it made around. She held her head up.

"Had you been in love?"

I looked at her in the eyes before answering. Those glassy eyes looked wonderful.

"Many times. Why?"

She bit her lips. "I had never been in one."

"Really?"

"Yeah."

Awkward silence followed. She placed a finger on one of mine.

"You?"

"Yeah?"

"Would you love me?"







Ehmagawd. Somebody get me the paddles. My heart's gonna crash. NOW!

24 comments:

W. Suhailaliza W. M. H. said...

jeng jeng jeng!!!
tetiba i plak yg suspen!!

terima sajalah lamaran itu jacky.
sah!

Aniz . said...

mesti you slalu dgr lagu iris lately eh? :P

shera said...

so bagaimana...? jeng jeng jeng ;p

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

Elly: haha..let's see how the story goes la

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

Aniz.:

Iris is one of the most celebrated songs in my playlist since 1998 when the motion picture 'City of Angels' was screened, having Iris as one of the OST.

So it is not since lately. i had been listening to Iris since almost eleven years back haha :D

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

pinkeen: tataw :D

W. Suhailaliza W. M. H. said...

Ah. Iris has always been my heart broken song!! or.. doomed song. all time song lah.

euphoric when to console my heart..
eceh..geli plak jiwang2 ginih!

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

it's not a song that is negative to me, though.

when i listen to it by accident at the mall or while driving, it reminds me of Seth and his passion - the said willingness to go so far for a soon-to-be-wasted love.

but he said not even a single word of regret. he said, "I would rather have had one breath of her hair, one kiss of her mouth, one touch of her hand, than eternity without it."

that song can stir my emotion right round.


=)

shera said...

tataw kunun..u blushing gilew ah time tu eyh? hehe

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

hahaha. takdela. rasa macam hening. mcm telinga x berfungsi. time stopped.

everything but her became blurry visions. it was electric. it was static. hell froze over. all things around didnt matter. world was silent. heart was as if to stop beating - you can actually hear ur heartbeat clearly in ur ears as ur nervousness takes over, and this beat slows down as time passes, still can clearly be heard in ur ears.

and then it stops. it just stop beating.

gosh i never had that feelings since years!

LuTaNiA said...

Uuuuuu~
But what's the sequence of ur post yg 'u did something really, really wrong' eh?
Is this the sequence?
And, I wonder, does she knows that you're writing about her in ur blog?
Does she reads ur blog like most of us do?
Waaah banyaknye soalan. >.<

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

Lutania,

my words are not meant for just eyes to see but emotions to interpret.

the sequence of the story is by the sequence of the lyric. refer to iris lyric.

about the blog..im not sure..not that she ever mentioned bout it, and not that i want to tell her either.

maybe she does read and maybe not.

thanks tho =D

Isabel said...

:) thumbs up!!

Fiza Falak said...

y am i so excited for ur love life when my is non existant?!?!?!??! unfair much

MeiLin said...

awww!!
so sweet... haha.
will wait up for ur next post. XD

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

belly button isabel: two fingers in the eyes! ahahahah

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

Fiza: aww jgn la mcm tu you! ur as wonderful as RC is! i will make sure you will get married first before i do, occey! =D

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

Melinda: amboi~

cik jaa said...

ouh,melted already.jack dilamar lagi.lagi??eh,sbelum nih dilamar jugak ke?? =p

dyn al said...

pst! si angau.

buat2 terkejut kunun.
okla.

taya susa paya ngorat lagi!

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

cik jaa: ouh. biaselah. eceh.

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

amoy: angau? manedeeeeeeeeeeeee

ala x challenging la kalo x ngorat lg. eceh.

cik jaa said...

malu-malu kucing plak.macam tak biase.hahaha.

Mohamad Nazmi Zaidi said...

manedeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee